1-star -- Erotic RomanceWRITING 101 / Lesson 1: Overuse of words and phrases can kill a book.
- This is the second time, in as many weeks, I've come across an author who missed this day in English. This writer's go-to word: beautiful.WRITING 101 / Lesson 2: Make your characters real to the reader.
- Instead, both Luke and Natalie were two-dimensional.WRITING 101 / Lesson 3: If your plot is character-driven, it dang well better have some character-development.
- Refer to Lesson 2.
I'm sorry. I know a lot of you liked this book. Either I'm being too picky lately or the Goddess of Sexy Books is having fun at my expense. Either way, I'm disappointed.